Talk:Mark Murphy (American football executive)

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Date	Process	Result
August 29, 2023	Good article nominee	Listed
November 30, 2023	Featured article candidate	Not promoted
April 1, 2024	Good topic candidate	Promoted
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on September 13, 2023. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Mark Murphy* played safety for the Washington Redskins from 1977 to 1984 while Mark Murphy played safety for the Green Bay Packers from 1980 to 1991?*
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Violation?

What's with this statement?

And he has an amazing daughter who is an amazing person.

That may be true, but how does it assist this article?

WAVY 10 17:04, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Birthplace

The Infobox was listing Mr. Murphy's birthplace as Fulton, New York, while the body of the article states it's Williamsville, New York. Googling turns up results for both. I changed the Infobox to read Williamsville. If anyone has definite information to the contrary, please change both links to either Fulton, Oswego County, New York or Fulton, Schoharie County, New York as appropriate. Nick Number (talk) 13:56, 24 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

A further note: Mark Murphy (singer) was born in Fulton, Oswego County, New York. Perhaps this is what caused the confusion. Nick Number (talk) 14:06, 24 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Mark Murphy (American football executive)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 12:37, 27 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:37, 27 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Images properly licensed
Link quarterback, kick-off, fumble, interception, video boards, divisional playoffs

Done. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:20, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I see no references to work with churches in ref #1

Done, fixed the reference. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:20, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The external links field should not only contain a Commons link. Delete the section and move the Commons link into the References section.

Not done my understanding of the template documentation for {{Commons category}} and {{Commons category-inline}} shows that using the template this way is perfectly appropriate. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:20, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I sit corrected as I forgot that the inline format is an exception.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:48, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Nicely done--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 09:42, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Sturmvogel 66, I have addressed your comments (diff) or responded above. Thanks for the review. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:20, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Vaticidalprophet (talk) 09:45, 9 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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... that Mark Murphy played safety for the Washington Redskins from 1977 to 1984 while Mark Murphy played safety for the Green Bay Packers from 1980 to 1991? Source: Mark Murphy 1977 to 1984 and Mark Murphy 1980 to 1991
- Reviewed: (1) Costco hot dog and (2) Tropical Storm Danny (2021)
- Comment: Mark Murphy (American football executive) was expanded to a GA on August 29, 2023

5x expanded by Gonzo fan2007 (talk). Self-nominated at 20:10, 29 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Mark Murphy (safety, born 1958); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

I'll review these. BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:19, 30 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall:

Both articles appear to meet all the criteria. Hook is interesting (even more weird is that the one who played for the Redskins went on to be a noted executive with the Packers!) and verified. Looks good to go! BeanieFan11 (talk) 13:59, 5 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]