Talk:Marjorie (song)/GA1

GA Review

Passed. CatchMe (talk · contribs) 15:53, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Medxvo (talk · contribs) 10:52, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: CatchMe (talk · contribs) 06:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 1 doesn't specifically support the preceding sentence as ref 2 does.
- Removed it, please tell me if I should replace it with another source
  - The ref supports the sentence completely so it's fine as it is!
"...the pop maximalist sound..." - "the maximalist pop sound"?
- Done
"After filming, the three celebrated by drinking and unexpectedly continued writing..." - is the drinking part relevant?
- Replaced with "celeberated Folklore's success and and unexpectedly ..."
"...was composed from..." - "was composed using"?
- Done
I have seen GAs using "synthesizers" instead of "synths".
- Done
"...and one of Swift's better songs" - "and one of Swift's best songs".
- Done
"nine out of 274" - change "nine" to "9" for consistency and per MOS:NUMNOTES.
- Done. I completely forgot about MOS:NUMNOTES

This article is almost perfect for GA! I didn't even had to separate in sections as I usually do.. All good in the verifiable (and no copyright violations according to Earwig's Copyvio), broad, neutral, stable, and illustrated criteria. I will put this On hold until some minor issues are addressed! CatchMe (talk · contribs) 06:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, CatchMe! I believe I've addressed all of your comments, let me know if anything needs further adjustments. Thanks so much for the review, I greatly appreciate it :)) Medxvo (talk) 07:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Medxvo: Excellent work! I see everything is fine so I will ✓ Pass this. Congrats and happy holidays!! CatchMe (talk · contribs) 15:50, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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