Talk:Maria Giovanna Paone

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Article tags for improvement and edits

I reviewed this article and made some changes to ground it in the citations around the subject's notability, and tightened up some prose to bring it to a more neutral point of view.

I've removed the tags around citations and "reads like an advertisement" but I think they can be re-added if future edits require them (as well as if other editors feel the article still needs them.) --Zippy (talk) 18:06, 19 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Correct title at company?

In the article, it mentions that Paone's title is President (in the infobox) and Vice President (in the Work section). It would be good to standardize on the current title, and if the other titles are correct for previous roles, to either give them a date, or remove them if they're not central to article. --Zippy (talk) 18:19, 19 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]