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The unblock request for my account has been reviewed and approved as this page WAS NEVER “created or edited in return for undisclosed payments”. Accordingly, I'd appreciate help in removing the warning and reinstating the page.
As agreed, I have now performed some minor edits to remove any possibly loaded word, while also adding a couple of additional references that further substantiate the legitimacy of some arguments.
PREVIEW
- Added citation of a 3 pages review of the book published in 2020 by the Journal of Sustainable Business and Management Solutions in Emerging Economies.
- Removed the word “widely”
- Moved the external link to Routledge website under ‘Education and career’. The book page should remain as it is evidence of “worldwide recognition”. It lists in fact 8 positive reviews conducted by leading scholars in the field of sustainability from as many different countries.
EDUCATION AND CAREER:
- Replaced the word “multiple” with “a number of”
- Added the award won by the book Entrepreneurship at the Bottom of the Pyramid at the Hollywood Book Festival in 2018.
- Replaced the word “leading” with “important”. Creiamo (talk) 16:27, 6 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Help in moving page back to mainspace

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I have used time and effort to create this page. Unfortunately, I fear the intended aim of moving the article to Draft was a backdoor route to deletion.

the topic was never nominated at AfD.
I understand the reason that drove moving the article to draft status a few months ago, but that suspicion was answered and my account unblocked. However, the warning sign has not been removed from the page!
there has not been a single solicitation for content improvement.
the admin didn't link to his/her decision to move the article into draftspace nor there has ever been a deletion discussion of the page
the page remains invisible to anyone wanting to initiate AfC submission process to have the page moved back to mainspace

Creiamo (talk) 22:18, 19 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Crelamo: Strictly speaking, the {{help me}} template should be used on your own user talk page.

If you wish to submit your draft for AfC review, simply add the template {{subst:submit}} to the source text.

Since editors with conflicts of interest are allowed to create and submit drafts, submitting this draft might not be considered a violation of the terms of your unblock. Placing a disclosure on your user page would likely help keep this from becoming an issue. I see that Fram has already raised the question on your talk page, so proceed with caution. — jmcgnh^{(talk) (contribs)} 22:37, 19 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Jmcgnh: Thank you for the instructions and sorry for not posting in the right place! My relationship with Dr. Tonelli was fully disclosed before the block being removed and remains available on my user page under 'Conflict of interest'. I will now proceed to add the AfC review template and replace with it the false and outdated "undisclosed payments warning".Creiamo (talk) 23:32, 19 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Crelamo: Instead of a bunch of seemingly disconnected 'See also' entries, I recommend that you use the reviews of Tonelli's book(s) to expand that aspect of his career and organically bring up those topics with appropriate links. As {{edit request}}s, of course. — jmcgnh^{(talk) (contribs)} 06:05, 22 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Formative years

Added a few sentences and references pertaining the years immediately following his doctoral degree. The influence of leading business scholars and his participation in ongoing international projects represent the foundations for his later works which, as already mentioned by others, should be further unpacked to bring up the missing links throughout his career --Mobinow (talk) 11:48, 29 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

General improvements to the article

PREVIEW
- Added citation of a 3 pages review of the book published in 2020 by the Journal of Sustainable Business and Management Solutions in Emerging Economies.
- Moved the external link to Routledge website under ‘Education and career’. The book page should remain as it is evidence of “worldwide recognition”. It lists 8 reviews conducted by leading scholars in the field of sustainability from as many different countries.
EDUCATION AND CAREER:
- Replaced loaded wording
- Added the award won by the book Entrepreneurship at the Bottom of the Pyramid at the Hollywood Book Festival in 2018.
Creiamo (talk) 16:27, 6 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Formative years

Added a few sentences and references pertaining the years immediately following his doctoral degree. The influence of leading business scholars and his participation in ongoing international projects represent the foundations for his later works which, as already mentioned by others, should be further unpacked to bring up the missing links throughout his career --Mobinow (talk) 11:48, 29 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Added details of his transition from perceiving profit maximization as the ultimate goal of any business entity, to that being sustainability. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 125.168.95.43 (talk) 09:45, 16 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]