Talk:Manuel Komnenos (kouropalates)

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Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 20:36, 2 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"File:Seal of Manuel Komnenos, kouropalates.jpg" needs a PD tag for the coin itself.
- Done
Could we have an in line translation or explanation of kouropalates? Likewise sebastos and typikon.
- Hmmm, yes for the typikon, but I am hesitant for the others; it should suffice to place them in context as court ranks. Explaining what they mean or their exact place in the hierarchy would IMO derail the article.

Hi Constantine, what you have done for sebastos is more or less what I wanted/expected, and I can see the arguement that what you currently have for kouropalates is as much as a general reader would reasonably want, without Wikilinking, so fine.

A non-GAN point: foreign words should use lang templates, not just italics.
- Done
"Mt. Azalas" - in full?
- Done
Could Garland have a Publisher location.
- Done

That's all, bar a bit of copy editing which you will want to check. As usual, let me know if I have caused any problems. Nice article. Gog the Mild (talk) 12:19, 3 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Gog the Mild, thanks for taking this on (and for the prose tweaks). Your points have been addressed. Constantine ✍ 18:09, 4 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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