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Moved to mainspace by Bobby Cohn (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Bobby Cohn (talk) 00:13, 30 August 2024 (UTC).[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Manhood: The Masculine Virtues America Needs/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Bobby Cohn (talk · contribs) 18:25, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: HistoryTheorist (talk · contribs) 20:55, 12 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Overall Evaluation

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

1st Pass: Basic Formatting and GAN Instructions

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  • checkY follows basic citation instructions regarding background of the book (all aspects) but does not use in-line citations in Synopsis
  • checkY is a stable article not undergoing major dispute
  • checkY images are properly sourced and labelled
  • checkY article takes a neutral and detached tone without promoting a specific angle
  • checkY proper basic orthographical conventions and standard formatting conventions have been followed
  • Bottom Line: Article is worth reviewing at a deeper level, passes evaluation for stability, image fields. Sourcework and prose are eligible for a deeper review.

2nd Pass: A slightly more advanced dive into Tone, Prose, Citations

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  • Synopsis is a neutral, detached summary of the contents of the book. States objective facts and uses Hawley's words when appropriate. However, it does not appropriate his logic as its own. Makes appropriate connections the references Hawley uses.
    • Other aspects do a good job keeping a neutral, detached tone. Gives adequate weight to cultural critics, as Hawley has communicated controversial ideas, but doesn't take the perspective of a cultural critic.
  • Takes a balanced view of background and context of Hawley's writing, using more detached sources to take a detached view. Is based on object fact, not political opinion.
  • [caution: an overexplanation] Uses a wide variety of sources, from mildly contrarian Christian progressive-conservative magazines which provide me with a bit of snark for every perspective to Hawley's own books, progressive sources, primary sources, etc. Also cites from critics of critics (see Daily Beast.) To maintain a balanced view, sources of alternate perspectives from Hawley's were considered but not taken too seriously.
     Additional information needed I want to be sure you aren't concerned about any of the context here. I included Christianity Today because, given the subject of the book, it felt like relevent background. However, it (and additional previous work) was previously removed when this article was a draft (see this archived discussion), and I only just recently pit it back in. I would understand an argument that its inclusion is not relevant. Bobby Cohn (talk) 19:45, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      • Sorry. I read a lot of Christianity Today, one of the best religious magazines out there. Didn't mean to take it too far. Politics make my head hurt and I feel that for a Christian magazine, they give the most level-headed and even-tempered coverage. I believe thoughtfulness pays dividends regardless of religious/political leanings. They are currently in a stage of maturation and growth, and I feel like that if they embrace that, they'll do great things, even for atheists and other non-Christians. ❤HistoryTheorist❤ 23:51, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • Sidenote: you are doing a good job with political articles, I'd definitely encourage you to do more hard things. If you want a hard GA review, Thebiguglyalien has a Melania Trump article to review. I would do it, but it's too much for me to conquer by myself.
  • Suggestions:
    • I would recommend consolidating the first micro paragraph of the background section with the second. My reasoning is that it kind of looks weird to have a micro paragraph with no citation, even though all verification is provided in ref 2. There are other ways to deal with the issue, but that is my suggestion.
       Done – Special:Diff/1245542162. I presumed the statements would be basic enough (and proven elsewhere in the Wiki such at the author's page) to meet WP:BLUE but happy to consolidate because, as you said, these are already easily verifiable. Bobby Cohn (talk) 16:02, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • This is technically optional, but leaving a link to a brief synopsis somewhere in the article might be beneficial. I haven't gone in and dug deep yet, so perhaps I missed something. Will figure out formatting later.
       In progress I've reviewed MOS:PLOTSOURCE and it looks like I'll need citations for quotes. Unfortunatly, I've already returned my copy to the library. I can get the audiobook or kindle version, but its quite a long wait for the hardcover again. I may have to look into buying a used copy. Bobby Cohn (talk) 19:40, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Notes and Overall Evaluation

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  • I'm not done with this yet, but this has been the best Wikipedia article I've seen in awhile. Your skill for being politically and emotionally detached (you are basically another darn dirty Canadian like my journalism teacher) is so impressive that it's funny to anybody with enough political literacy but not enough to actually care. I think that might give me the motivation to finish up in a couple days and do some other Wikipedia work. Is definitely featured article material and I'd inquire about getting it promoted. Still expecting response by September 22nd, so I'll be patient still. ❤HistoryTheorist❤ 02:54, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you so much for your kind words; I appreciate your encouragement to strive for FA and while that's definitely the WP:PURPOSE of the project and any of my work, it felt a little daunting so I thought I'd run the gauntlet with a GAN first to receive feedback! I will begin to work through your points above in a point by point to address and implement your suggestions. Thanks, Bobby Cohn (talk) 14:04, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Bobby Cohn: I realize I grade GAs with slightly higher standards, so come take a look and give me some feedback. I don't see any issues with this and I think that this could be top-tier FA material with some more feedback from more experienced users. Go for gold! Will definitely help if needed. (If you want, I have an East German progressive-conservative Christian biography article for you to review. It's a nice antidote to the Trump-Harris circus in the USA. Even if it fails, I need somebody to tell me where I am at.) ❤HistoryTheorist❤ 02:59, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I'm happy to take a look at the article, and with the recent changes approving good article review circles (disclaimer: I had only recently become aware of this change, and I am not familiar with the specifics of the page in depth) I think we could find another to include in a review so that the QPQ is above-board. It is my goal to get involved in reviewing GANs once I get my first one approved. GAN is something I'm eager to contribute to more. Bobby Cohn (talk) 14:08, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Alrighty! I'm afraid of the GARC but I have been secretly watching. If you ever want to do a team-review for Melania Trump, I love Slovenia and would do personal and you would do political side, I think TBUH might appreciate that. ❤HistoryTheorist❤ 23:48, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    [warning: election season is coming!] However, I understand that you might not want to, lest you become deeply attached to the poisonous venom which is modern American politics. There's a reason I had to reduce my activity level at Wikipedia. ❤HistoryTheorist❤ 23:58, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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