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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:15, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "movement, proposed" no comma.
  •  Done


  • Link Mackinac Island in the main body.
  •  Done


  • "of turning the" converting?
  •  Done


  • "charter" is there a relevant link for this?
  •  Done


  • "1965-1970" en-dash.
  •  Done


  • "the Old Mission House, to Mackinac" no comma.
  •  Done


  • "of $1.5 million for" inflate.
  •  Done


  • From whom was the gift?
  •  Done


  • Where are the staff numbers in the infobox referenced?
  •  Done


  • Students and Undergraduates, both representing the same 350? If so, just use Undergraduates, no need for students.
  •  Done


  • "mascot the American Eagle. The" links to a dab.
  •  Done


  • "Mission Point Resort' image is squashing the refs, you could add a {{clear}} template after it to relax the columns.
  •  Done


  • Ref 18 has some odd punctuation going on.
  •  Done



That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:22, 27 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for review. I'll get started on it. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:40, 27 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@The Rambling Man: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. Here is a picture of my wife and I in 2014 at Mission Point Resort We go to Mackinac Island often and walk all over the resort island = a very much fun place to go to. It's about 200 miles north of where we live = four hours drive. No cars allowed on the island.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:30, 27 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]