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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 11:22, 31 January 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- ""once again under written, and brown is not allowed the opportunity to explore and reveal his character traits,[33] with the character being "too nice"." - is the sentence from once to traits a quote?
- ""Christ, I miss the Cold War")." - why a bracket?
- "is a out-dated relic" - an?
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- Ref 6,10,12,16,17,20,23,29,50,51,53 don't point to any citation. Overall fine.
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- All the above now completed. Cheers - SchroCat (^ • @) 13:27, 3 February 2012 (UTC)
- You forgot 50,51--♫GoP♫TCN 15:16, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
- Sorry - now done! - SchroCat (^ • @) 23:29, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
- Some formatting issues
- The quote box could do with aligning to either the left or right side, with the text wrapped around it.
- The citation follows on directly from the preceeding text, so it has to follow and not have text wrapped around it. - SchroCat (^ • @) 00:09, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
- I agree with Schrodinger. --♫GoP♫TCN 15:16, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
- The quote box could do with aligning to either the left or right side, with the text wrapped around it.
- Where the films are listed there is a bit white space. I would put Bernard Lee's and Judi Dench's films/games into 2 columns to remove some of this white space.
- Thanks - I'll have a think about the best way to get this to look good, as well as flow properly. - SchroCat (^ • @) 00:09, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
- I agree with Mattg82. The white space is a bit distracting.--♫GoP♫TCN 15:16, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
- Where the films are listed there is a bit white space. I would put Bernard Lee's and Judi Dench's films/games into 2 columns to remove some of this white space.
- Mattg82 (talk) 23:53, 3 February 2012 (UTC)
- All now sorted - I hope! Let me know if you would like any more changes undertaken. Cheers - SchroCat (^ • @) 23:29, 4 February 2012 (UTC)