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Some proposed changes

This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. The request was not specific enough.

Information to be added: MTAA Super (Motor Trades Association of Australia Superannuation Fund) is an industry superannuation fund established to serve the motor trades and allied industries.

Created in 1989, it has become one of Australia’s largest super funds. As at 2019, MTAA Super has more than $12 billion funds under management and represents more than 200,000 members and more than 50,000 active employers. [1 https://mtaasuper.com.au/-/media/consumer/files/annualreports/mtaa-super-annual-report-2019-web-20191002.ashx?la=en]

MTAA Super is a public offer fund and allows membership to all Australians.

Explanation of issue: Correct a number of inaccuracies in the original page. This content above will replace all content in the current summary page.

119.15.97.166 (talk) 06:23, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 10-DEC-2019

Clarification requested

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Regards, Spintendo 18:33, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Reply 13-DEC-2019

Thanks for clarifying. Here is the new revision in the new template:

Sample edit request

1. Please remove the entire summary page of MTAA Super:

"Motor Trades Association of Australia Superannuation Fund (MTAA Super) is one of Australia's largest public offer industry superannuation funds and is the peak national representative organisation for the retail, service and repair sector of the Australian automotive industry. It was established in 1989 for the motor trades and allied industries. MTAA Super represents over 100,000 retail motor trade businesses nationally, and has a combined turnover of over $120 billion and employs over 316,000 people, making it the largest stand-alone small business association in Australia. MTAA Super was named SuperRatings 7 year platinum performer for 2003-2010.[1]"

2. Please add the following claim as a replacement to the summary page of MTAA Super:

"MTAA Super (Motor Trades Association of Australia Superannuation Fund) is an industry superannuation fund established to serve the motor trades and allied industries.

Created in 1989, it has become one of Australia’s largest super funds. As at 2019, MTAA Super has more than $12 billion funds under management and represents more than 200,000 members and more than 50,000 active employers. [1 https://mtaasuper.com.au/-/media/consumer/files/annualreports/mtaa-super-annual-report-2019-web-20191002.ashx?la=en]
MTAA Super is a public offer fund and allows membership to all Australians."

3. Using as the reference:

"1 https://mtaasuper.com.au/-/media/consumer/files/annualreports/mtaa-super-annual-report-2019-web-20191002.ashx?la=en"

4. Reason for change being made:

"Information in the summary is incorrect. MTAA Super is not the peak body for the motor trades industry. It currently has a membership of more than 200,000 and the fund has more than $12 billion under its management. If this could be corrected that would be greatly appreciated."

Reply 19-DEC-2019

Hi Editors,

Just wondering if these changes above were ok to publish on the MTAA Super page? Happy to review any changes.

Regards, MTAA Super team. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 119.15.97.166 (talk) 21:50, 18 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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