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Reviewer: HorrorFan121 (talk) 02:30, 31 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be reviewing this article. ;) I have found a few minor problems with the article.

  • Channel 5 links to a disambiguation page. [1] This needs to be corrected. checkY
  • The article has two rotted links. These [2] (#4) [3] (#24) need to be fixed. checkY

Lead

  • The lead should summarize the article as a whole. The reception of the character should be mentioned somewhere in there. checkY

Prose

  • I found no problems with the prose after reading the article. No grammar/spelling mistakes. checkY

Citations

  • The last sentence of the reception section should have a citation. checkY
  • No problem with reliability on the sources. checkY


Overall, a very interesting article. Once you fixed these issues I brought up it should be good. HorrorFan121 (talk) 02:30, 31 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I've fixed all the points mentioned. I expanded the lead to reflect the reception, there are now no disambiguation or dead links.RAIN*the*ONE BAM 18:49, 31 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Great! The article can be listed now. Congrats on the hard work. ;) HorrorFan121 (talk) 20:18, 31 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]