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The following major changes has been made in the article:

The sentence “Coach Lea Salonga likened Gairanod to Nora Aunor because of being simple and terrible even being small, and said if she would have a chance to pick, she would go for Gairanod” has been changed to "Salonga likened Gairanod to Nora Aunor because of being "small but terrible" while singing in a simple way. Coach Bamboo Mañalac said that if he were to pick, he would go for Gairanod.” –The phrase "small and terrible" was quoted in the cited article, and based on my understanding, it was Bamboo who said the last line.
“At the end, she was proclaimed the winner and she fell in tears.” —Although there was a citation, the cited article did not say in any way that Gairanod “fell in tears”. Thus, the phrase “and she fell in tears” was removed from the text. However, there is a photograph that shows Gairanod who seems to be in tears, but I don't think it would suffice.
"On this guesting, they said that they will have a concert on the United States soon, and it is being organized. The concert will be part of a tour, meaning that they will also go to other countries." –this has been changed to "It was stated on the show that they will have a US concert tour." In the cited article, it was not the kids who said that they will have a concert tour, and a link to the concert tour section of a WP article Concert was added.

(Valfury (talk) 08:29, 3 September 2014 (UTC))[reply]

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