Talk:Love the Way You Lie (Part II)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 02:24, 12 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:

Infobox

Add song artwork to this article
There isn't one. It wasn't released as a single. Calvin • ⁹⁹⁹ 11:40, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

"It features guest vocals from rapper Eminem." - State nationality of Eminem
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"It serves as the sequel to the 2010 worldwide hit single "Love the Way You Lie" - Put commas around "Love the Way You Lie"
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Background and composition

"...but with Rihanna as the lead vocalist, viewing things from the female perspective. - Change second part of sentence to flow better
Done Calvin • ⁹⁹⁹ 22:24, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Add an audio sample of the song, which according to WP:SAMPLE needs to be less than 10% of the original recording and about 64kbps in quality
Not done I don't know how to add audio samples Calvin • ⁹⁹⁹ 22:24, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

"...Loud works the pop gizmos..." - Italicize "Loud"
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"It’s sick that all these battles are what keeps me satisfied,” she sings." - Put single quote around the lyrics
Done Calvin • ⁹⁹⁹ 22:24, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"Chris Richards of Washington Post..." - Make it "The Washington Post"
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Live performances

"...singing an acappella version of "Love The Way You Lie Part II"." - Put "Part II" around brackets
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Credits and personnel

No issues

Charts

"...edition of the album, however..." - Make separate sentences
Done Calvin • ⁹⁹⁹ 22:24, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

References

Reference 1 - The publisher should be AOL Inc.; you should only include the "work=" parameter when a work needs to be italicized (magazines and other written works are italicized only)
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 2 - The publisher is "Mention"; work is "Toronto Sun", not "MTV"
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 3 - The publisher is MTV Networks; "work=" parameter not needed in this source because it is not written work
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 4 & 5 - Publisher is Sony/ATV Music Publishing; where is year 2010?
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 6 - Publisher needs to be wiki-linked
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 9 - "work=" parameter not needed
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 12 - "work=" parameter not needed
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 14 - Publisher is needed
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 17 - Publisher is needed
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 18 - Billboard is a magazine, so it should be italicized; publisher needed; fix date format to "yyyy-mm-dd"
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 19 - Work and publisher parameters are needed
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 20 - Not sure if it is a reliable source
Done Removed. Calvin • ⁹⁹⁹ 22:26, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Organize references better (Ex: where it has "Reflist", make it "Reflist|2")
Done. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

OVERALL REVIEW

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are a few issues keeping this article from good article status. First of all, there are numerous minor issues which I listed below that are affecting the quality of the article. Also, many of the references aren't properly formatted. I will give you the general seven days to fix the mistakes and/or debate the ones you do not believe affect GA status. - Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 05:25, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Oh, it looks like someone has gone through and made the changes that I was going to do..... Calvin • ⁹⁹⁹ 21:45, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I thought that all editors could participate on GA corrections. No one takes away your merit. But still there are errors to fix. VítoR™ ^{get LOUD!} 22:11, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

All comments have been addressed Rp0211. Is there is anything else that concerns you that I can amend? Calvin • ⁹⁹⁹ 22:29, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Since all of the issues have been addressed, I have decided to put this article in good article status at this time. I will work on uploading a music file for this article to add clarity. Congratulations and keep up the good work. - Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 23:20, 13 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks :) Calvin • ⁹⁹⁹ 11:49, 14 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]