Talk:Love You Better (Oh Land song)/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 18:00, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I will grab this for review. Aoba47 (talk) 18:00, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

I am not sure of the phrase "taken from" as it sounds somewhat odd to me. I would suggest revising it.

Done

In the phrase "It was written and produced by Oh Land" in the "Background and composition" section, it is not entirely clear what "it" is meant in this context as the previous sentence is about the album not the song.

Done

I am not certain about the value of the quote "it is a song that means a lot to [her]". Could you possibly be more specific about what she means by this? Otherwise, it sounds somewhat generic and does not add much to the actual article itself. If she does not say anything beyond this, then I would suggest removing the quote.

Done

Please attribute who described the song as "delicate, melancholy ode to wisdom and age".

I reworded it from the previous comment; please let me know if this sits better with you. Carbrera (talk) 04:40, 3 August 2017 (UTC).[reply]

In the second paragraph of the "Background and composition" section, the following two phrases (She also described and Oh Land also discusses) and I would suggest revising to avoid the repetition of "also".

Done

I would move the music critics link up from the "Reception" section to this sentence (Several critics described "Love You Better" as a) in the "Background and composition" section.

Done

Did Kristian Levring provide any reasons for choosing to making a video for this song?

My guess is that Oh Land was pretty relentless in wanting to work with him, and he finally caved; I can't confirm this, and sadly I didn't find any other articles regarding this. Carbrera (talk) 04:40, 3 August 2017 (UTC).[reply]

Makes sense to me; I was just curious about this part. Aoba47 (talk) 14:27, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Were there are any reviews for the music video?

Unfortunately, I couldn't find any other than the review which basically just described the video. Unfortunately Oh Land isn't on the same level as Rihanna or Madonna... Carbrera (talk) 04:40, 3 August 2017 (UTC).[reply]

Understandable; it is rather unfortunate that certain artists do not seem to get as much attention as others. Thank you for clearing this up and my above question as well. Aoba47 (talk) 14:27, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Final comment

Wonderful work with this article. Once my relatively minor comments are addressed, I will pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 18:13, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Aoba47 – Thank you so, so much! I responded above. I should be able to take a look at your FAC within the next two days! Hope it's going well for you. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 04:40, 3 August 2017 (UTC).[reply]

Thank you for addressing my comments. I will ✓ Pass this. This was an enjoyable read, and thank you for introducing me to Oh Land and her music. Aoba47 (talk) 14:27, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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