Talk:Love (Destiny)

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Orphaned references in Love (Destiny)

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Love (Destiny)'s orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "cdjournal":

From Fly High (song): CD Journal Staff (February 9, 2000). "Ayumi Hamasaki / Fly High (Limited) [Out of Print]". CD Journal (in Japanese). Retrieved July 27, 2016.
From Boys & Girls (Ayumi Hamasaki song): CD Journal Staff (July 14, 1999). "Ayumi Hamasaki / Boys & Girls [Out of Print]". CD Journal (in Japanese). Retrieved July 28, 2016.
From Kanariya: CD Journal Staff (December 8, 1999). "Ayumi Hamasaki / Kanariya (Limited) [Out of Print]". CD Journal (in Japanese). Retrieved July 23, 2016.
From Together When...: CD Journal Staff (January 1, 2008). "Ayumi Hamasaki / Guilty (album review)". CD Journal (in Japanese). Retrieved June 27, 2016.
From Guilty (Ayumi Hamasaki album): CD Journal Staff (January 1, 2008). "Guilty – Ayumi Hamasaki". CD Journal. Retrieved February 8, 2016.
From Rock 'n' Roll Circus: CD Journal Staff (April 14, 2010). "Ayumi Hamasaki / Rock'n'Roll Circus [CD only]" (in Japanese). CD Journal. Retrieved January 29, 2016.
From You Were...: CD Journal Staff (December 29, 2009). "Ayumi Hamasaki / You Were...Ballad [CD and DVD]" (in Japanese). CD Journal. Retrieved January 30, 2016.
From Whatever (Ayumi Hamasaki song): CD Journal Staff (February 20, 1999). "Ayumi Hamasaki – Whatever [Out of Print]". CD Journal. Retrieved December 27, 2015.
From Next Level (Ayumi Hamasaki album): CD Journal Staff (March 25, 2009). "Ayumi Hamasaki / Next Level [2CD + DVD]". CD Journal. Retrieved February 1, 2016.
From Loveppears: CD Journal Staff (November 10, 1999). "Loveppears – Ayumi Hamasaki". CD Journal (in Japanese). Retrieved July 14, 2016.
From A (Ayumi Hamasaki EP): CD Journal Staff (August 11, 1999). "Ayumi Hamasaki – A [EP]". CD Journal (in Japanese). Retrieved July 14, 2016.

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT ⚡ 02:07, 29 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 20:10, 27 September 2016 (UTC) → Soon... Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:10, 27 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Ayumi Hamasaki. It served as the second single from Hamasaki's second studio album Loveppears (1999). → Ayumi Hamasaki, serving as the second single for her second studio album, Loveppears (1999).
There are three official versions of the single: a ballad version arranged by Tsunku, an edited version featuring vocals by Tsunku, the vocalist of the band Sharan Q, and a dance-influenced version that was included on Loveppears. → Three versions of the recording have been made available—a ballad version arranged by Tsunku, an edited version with vocals by Tsunku, and a dance-influenced version included on Loveppears.
Link music critics to "music journalism"
music critics. Some highlighted → music critics, with some highlighting
Commercially, the single → Commercially, the recording
was a success → experienced success
her first record → her first song ("record" is mainly used for album releases)
It became → It also became
entered again on both record charts → and re-entered both charts.
which featured → and featured
singing the song → singing to the song
To promote the single → In order to promote the single
link "remix and greatest hits compilations" to their respective articles on Wikipedia
It was used → It was also used
official theme song → remove "official"
the Japanese → Japanese
To date, it is → To date, it remains
highest selling → highest-selling

Infobox

Digital download → digital download
Remove full stops after each caption

Versions and composition

I prefer editing the section about the versions by myself, as there are too many errors to list them comfortably here.
is heavily influenced throughout the album → heavily influences the album
sheet music at → sheet music published by
each recording → each track

Release

"Love (Destiny)" It was → "Love (Destiny)" was released
tracks; the first two being the original recordings, whilst he latter two are instrumentals. → track, with the first two being the original recordings and the rest instrumentals.
Then on February → Subsequently, on February
set comma after "previous album track".
The CD single was marked with a special colored, this being brown. → This is overfluous and can be easily seen in the infobox, thus no need to write this out

Reception

A reviewer at Amazon.com → A reviewer at Amazon
whom praised → and praised
was a success → experienced success
week of sales → week of availability
it then went → The recording then went
in that chart → on that chart
making it Hamasaki's longest charting single → marking the singer's longest-charting release
they both → both tracks
longest spanning → longest-spanning
By the end of 1999, it → By the end of 1999, "Love (Destiny)"
chart; the single was ranked behind two of Hamasaki's other releases, "Boys & Girls" and her EP A, and was the ninth highest selling single by a female artist → chart behind two fellow releases of the singer, "Boy & Girls" (RELEASE DATE) and her extended play A (RElEASE DATE).
Likewise, it ranked → Likewise, it charted
12 highest selling single → 12th highest-selling song
data base → database
CD's → CDs
for 4 weeks on the top → four weeks within the top
However, the single reached number 100 on TBS Count Down TV chart on May 14, 2001, her lowest entry on that chart to date.[23] → you should mention this earlier in this section

Music video and promotion

single version → remove "version"
As usual, I prefer editing the synopsis before passing this article.
It was used → It was additionally
the Japanese television → remove "the"
Remove "this being her"
A remix by → A remix produced by
on two of Hamasaki's greatest hits album → plural please
Remove "that being" here as well
The song has been included → "Love (Destiny)" has further been included

Certifications and sales

N/A → None
Remove full stops

Release history

Use scope="row" for countries
Unlink formats and labels as usual

Notes

There is currently insufficient evidence to determine what date Hamasaki's digital releases appeared on online retails. The closest source for iTunes Store evidence is at Jame World, whom confirmed Hamasaki's work was released worldwide on iTunes in September 2008. → Do the same what you did on "Kanariya" please.

References

There's an issue with reference #41

Outcome

I've put this On hold for 7 days to allow edits. Don't forget to ping me when you're ready or have a question. Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:07, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- @Cartoon network freak: All complete CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 03:56, 13 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  - Passing! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:14, 13 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.