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The result was: rejected by SL93 (talk) 02:08, 8 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Not long enough.

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... the upcoming documentary film, Love, Lizzo, by singer Lizzo, documentary film director Doug Pray, streaming service HBO Max, was announced and is set to be released on November 24, 2022? Source: https://www.billboard.com/culture/tv-film/lizzo-hbo-max-documentary-release-date-1235155085/
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Created by JuanGLP (talk). Self-nominated at 13:29, 19 October 2022 (UTC).[reply]

Article is new enough (18 October), not long enough (needs to be at least 1500 characters, currently 1318). The synopsis section is currently just a direct press quote, any other refs or ways that this could be reworded to be neutral. For a documentary releasing next month, there is very little detail on the production. Ref 5 (Warner Press) should not have shouting in the title (all caps). No QPQ needed as only has 1 previous DYK. The hook is basically just saying there is a documentary with Lizzo, anything else more interesting that could be talked about? Cowlibob (talk) 12:00, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- @JuanGLP and Cowlibob: The synopsis section certainly needs to be redone. I've also removed two statements from the article that were sourced to an unreliable-but-independent source and a press release, dropping the char count to just over 1000 bytes. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 20:15, 1 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Unfortunately, I have to mark for closure. No edits made to the article for a fortnight by nominator. Not eligible due to above. Cowlibob (talk) 13:06, 5 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]