Talk:Love, Blactually/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MayhemMario (talk · contribs) 16:18, 25 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Im reviewing this article and will begin my review soon. Mayhem Mario 16:18, 25 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Overall Look

Having a look at the overall article- I can see it has many problems- just using the tools to my right.

Sources Im not going to go into a full review untill (if you can) these problems have been fixed- at the moment the articles not looking good.

1. The title isnt what you say- it is just 'Family Guy-Love Blactually'.

2. No mention of what your quoting in this source. (i.e. USELESS.) Also- is 'comingsoonnet' a reliable source?

3. The title is 'Family Guy, Vol. 7 (2009)'

4. Again, 'Family Guy - Season 8 (3 Disc Set)' Okay also, Source 3 can source this quote. I think as Amazon is a much more reliable source just use this to quote both. (i.e. Delete this source and source the information with Source 3)

5. OH DEAR. This soruce is excatly the same as source 1. (i.e. Delete this soruce/ merge with soruce 1)

6. This source is dead, which means either a) delete all the information this soruce quoted b) find an alternative source c) puts 'cituation needed' tags- (look messy though).

9. I don't honsestly think your using this source to its full potential. Im not sure if it is relaible- but I think there is much more quotes you can get from that source.

10. See Source 9.

- On hold for 7 days untill further action is taken by the reviewer. Mayhem Mario 18:07, 30 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

There's been no action in two weeks; should it be failed? Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:30, 15 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I agree, I thought i'd let the user have a chance but its been too long. Mayhem Mario 16:04, 15 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Failed, no action taken. Mayhem Mario 16:05, 15 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]