Talk:Living in the Age of Airplanes/GA1

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:24, 21 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Template:Infobox film recommends using "{{plainlist}} or {{ubl}}" instead of <br /> in the infobox.
Is the note "Stylized in all caps" important/necessary? It appears the title just uses a font that looks like ALL CAPS.
"from April 8" – two options → "from April 8 [to] [date]" or "on April 8"
"some felt it lacks" → "some felt it lacked"
"The film won several awards" – you can just say three and that two were for the score.
"observes ancient humans walked" – word missing?
Airplanes... "it could fly" ... "it can also" → "they could fly" ... "they can also"
"crucial to connect the world" → "crucial to connecting the world"
Add an "a" before "bridge between cultures".

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Done, the footnote's removed. Gerald WL 14:57, 11 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"There were four skeleton crew." → "There were four skeleton crews."
"Terwilliger stated Waruszewski" → "Terwilliger stated that Waruszewski" or "Terwilliger said Waruszewski"
"At certain scenes" → "In certain scenes"
"were used used because IMAX" – double word
"reminiscent to" → "reminiscent of"
"Hornerl" – name typo in #Post-production
"going on in out world" – might want to silently correct that typo for "our"
"Terwiliger" and "prised the premiere" – typos
"categorized a" → "categorized as a"
""accusing" travelers for" → ""accusing" travelers of"
Add a comma after "Ronnie Scheib of Variety said".
"The film's aesthetics was" → "The film's aesthetics were"
Done for all points, some resolved with alternative ways. Gerald WL 06:24, 19 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]