Talk:Live Show/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tbh®tch^Talk ^© Happy Holidays 23:04, 9 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review it in this days. Tbh®tch^Talk ^© Happy Holidays 23:04, 9 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:

B. MoS compliance:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
See below

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
See below

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:

On hold one week Tbh®tch^Talk ^© Happy Holidays 05:14, 11 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

General

~~File:30 Rock - Live Show.jpg Must be reduced.~~ Tagged. I didn't actually see an explicit guideline for the resolution, but I'm sure there's one somewhere. The file hasn't been reduced as of this writing, but I've added {{nonfree reduce}}.

Copyrighted images must be 200px - 300px, in Wikipedia, per fair use rules. Tbh®tch^Talk ^© Happy Holidays 05:42, 13 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

~~a dead link and a possible dead link (in yellow)~~

Plot

~~the head writer of TGS with Tracy Jordan -> Maybe "The Girlie Show with Tracy Jordan (TGS)"~~

~~"Tracy upstage her and declares that she" -> "that" could be omitted.~~

~~Link polka~~

Production

~~and lead actress Tina Fey -> already mentioned -> and lead actress Fey~~

"Live Show" was co-written by series creator, executive producer, and lead actress Tina Fey and co-showrunner and executive producer Robert Carlock. -> "Live Show" was co-written by series creator, executive producer and lead actress Fey, and co-showrunner and executive producer Robert Carlock.

~~the NBC network -> link it~~

~~"of the season two episode "Secrets and Lies" as a benefit[5]" -> source does not state it~~

~~had sort of interesting personnel for it"[8] and following the conclusion -> had sort of interesting personnel for it",[8] and following the conclusion~~

~~since season one and her first -> since season one, and her first~~

Connection with television tropes

~~Tina Fey, Tracy Morgan, Rachel Dratch, Bill Hader, Julia Louis-Dreyfus, Chris Parnell, and director McCarthy-Miller -> Consistency, remove the already mentoined names.~~

~~ending sequence was a good night -> POV?~~ No, these are "goodnights" not "wikt:good nights".

Reception

"Live Show" drew in the largest audience for 30 Rock season five[20] with 6.701 million viewers[21] and reached a season -> "Live Show" drew in the largest audience for 30 Rock season five,[20] with 6.701 million viewers[21], and reached a season

References

~~Ref 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 20, 23, 24, 26, 28, 29, 31, 32, 33, 34, 35 and 36, need their publishers.~~ The publisher field is filled out on each of these. Sometimes, work is present as well.

Response I've taken the liberty of ~~striking through~~ your comments as I fix them; this will help me keep track of what I've done. If this is problematic, I can remove the tags. —Justin (koavf)❤T☮C☺M☯ 06:07, 12 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Excepting for some issues (maybe it's me, I don't know), and the image that must be reduced soon, I have no problem with the article, so I pass it. Good work. Tbh®tch^Talk ^© Happy Holidays 05:42, 13 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]