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GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:08, 15 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 20:08, 15 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good.
  • Change "which CBS intended to draw" to either "which CBS created with the intention of drawing" or "which CBS hoped would draw".
  • Done

Premise and characters

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  • No problems here.

Production

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  • The reference right after "ELP Communications" is a citation to the first episode. This should be replaced with a secondary source.
  • It is sourced directly from the episode's credits, which is consistent with WP:PRIMARY. Kind of like how music credits are sourced directly from the liner notes using cite av media. I have watched the episode myself so I know these are true.
  • Same issue with the reference after "the Castle Bryant Johnsen-designed title sequence".
  • Same as above; there isn't any mention in a secondary source but it is given in the credits, so the episode is cited directly.
  • Remove the third reference after "Happy Together" per WP:OVERLINK and since it's a primary source.
  • The first two references there cite the fact it is a cover of "Happy Together"; Ray Colcord being the composer is only mentioned in the third reference, which is in the episode's credits.

Episodes

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  • The notes after "Directed by" and "Written by" should look like notes (efns), and not like a reference.
  • Converted.
  • Additionally, the note near "May 8, 1989" should be lowercased per consistency with other articles.
  • Done.

Broadcast and cancellation

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  • No problems here.

Critical reception

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  • Since its a new section, the entire name David Bianculli should be present rather than just his last name.
  • Done.
  • The sentence "because the rest is trashy" is not in quotes or in the clipping, so I would reword or remove it since it doesn't have the tone usually present on Wikipedia.
  • It was an attempt at paraphrasing; removed.

Overview

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GAN table

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Notes

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