Talk:Little India MRT station/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: ZKang123 (talk · contribs) 13:15, 14 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Starship.paint (talk · contribs) 12:01, 13 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Table

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
2. Verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
	2c. it contains no original research.
	2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
	7. Overall assessment.

Comments

Hello, I have decided to take on this GAN review. This is my first GAN review. I cannot guarantee that this will be finished quickly, but it will be a priority for me on Wikipedia (so long as I have time for this website). starship.paint (talk / cont) 12:01, 13 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@ZKang123: - please see my first round of comments below. starship.paint (talk / cont) 14:02, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Lede

Lede should mention that the station was announced in 1996. starship
- Done.
Consider adding the companies that constructed the station to the lede. starship
- Truthfully I rather not, because unless the companies did something very outstanding or very bad with the project, they aren't worthy to be included.

Infobox

Please, to the best of your ability, source everything in the infobox. starship

Images

We have an image of the NEL platform but do not show File:Little India MRT Station DTL.jpg. Please find somewhere to insert this photo. starship
- There's already a photo of the DTL platforms at the DTL artwork section Woven Field. Usually for the history I would prioritise having an image of the construction site.

History

In preliminary studies for the North East line (NEL) in 1986, it was planned for the line to serve - who is "it"? Who planned? starship
- I just reworded the sentence in another manner.
The line was not considered financially viable in 1989 - considered by who? starship
- Government of Singapore
It was initially planned to close Buffalo Lane - when? starship
- Source did not say.
the Moulmein Tekka Residents' Committee raised concerns of road congestion - when? starship
- Source did not say.
a metal decking was constructed to keep the road open - when? starship
- Source did not say.
frontal segmental jacking method - is there any wikilink for this that can explain what this is? starship
- No
open-face tunnelling method - is there any wikilink for this that can explain what this is? starship
- No
required protection against settlement - any explanation, elaboration or wikilink for this? starship
- Ground settlement
manually mined - any explanation, elaboration or wikilink for this? starship
- It's just... manually mined?
Potential content to be added - any relation to the 2013 Little India riot? For example, this article says a rioter continued his streak of creating chaos and unrest by inciting others to help carry a small metal rack and ram it against a side wall of the Little India MRT station. starship
- Probably too trivial to be included.--ZKang123 (talk) 06:17, 16 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Details

Any way to include the nearby Farrer Park Field? starship
- Well it's not stated in source. So no.