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How was the srticle I wrote on the album "like an advertisement"? I simply wrote what was on the Wendy Moten page and then added something from the review on allmusic. That's not an advert. Nahnite (talk) 21:10, 28 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I tagged your article as "advert-like" due to the first line "Flush from her success with the album "Time For Change" released the previous year, Wendy Moten found herself back in the studio for the album "Life's What You Make It". sounds very much like a publicity line. Allthough I have tagged it as an advert, I will remove it once you (or I) have fixed the first line to a NPOV. Perhaps a tag about the tone would be better? But they basically mean the same thing, kiwiteen123 (talk) 21:34, 28 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I have changed the tag to "tone" on reflection, I'm going off wikipedia for a couple of days but can change it when I get back.

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I've added an opening to the page and made a few other changes to make it more Wikipedia-friendly. Hope that helps! Geach (talk) 22:31, 28 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]