Talk:Life's Shop Window/GA1
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 12:13, 9 June 2015 (UTC)
I'll give this a review shortly. Wizardman 12:13, 9 June 2015 (UTC)
- I'll review it tomorrow; somehow I keep running out of time each day. Wizardman 01:46, 16 June 2015 (UTC)
Here are the issue I found:
- "as $4500[b][16] or $6000" commas should be added to those dollar amounts.
That was the only thing I found, which I just went ahead and fixed myself. Should you want to take this to FAC, I'd suggest cleaning the plot a little bit. It took me a couple of reads to understand what precisely was going on in the film, and it does feel on the stilted side towards the end of the section (like several scenes pushed together rather than a single film, in a sense). Aside from that, everything else looks good, so I'll pass this. Wizardman 02:41, 17 June 2015 (UTC)