Talk:LiAngelo Ball/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 18:39, 14 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"but withdrew after he was suspended" "but withdrew from the university after..."
- I'll take this since User:TempleM retired. Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:57, 15 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Source for middle name and birthday?
- Middle name Birthday (easy to find) ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:00, 15 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"with Ball scoring" For hopefully obvious reasons, this doesn't work in this article ;) You're going to have to use first names for clarity.
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:00, 15 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"when he erupted" Watch word choice, could be more formal here.
- Changed to "when he scored" ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:01, 15 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"not a candidate for McDonald's All-American Game." for the McDonald's
- Changed. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:04, 15 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"136–93 triumph vs." Don't use abbreviations like this in the prose.
- Spelled out. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:05, 15 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Refs 103-109 are bare URL's.
- Filled in. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:19, 15 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Not evaluated the references yet, just the prose. Courcelles (talk) 19:20, 14 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

TMZ is not an RS, Ref 78.
- Replaced with a better ref. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:24, 15 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Lots of refs seem to need publishers/works.
- Is this really such an issue? ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:24, 15 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  - Guess not, at least not for GA, but it'll stop you cold at FAC. But, this is GA, and the article meets the criteria for referencing, so promoting. Courcelles (talk) 13:34, 16 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]