Talk:Lewis Holtby

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Did you know... that German footballer Lewis Holtby was eligible to represent England through his paternal lineage?

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Confirmed

Confirmed Lewis Holtby will join Tottenham Hotspur in July on a free transfer

Source1: http://www.dailymail.co.uk/sport/football/article-2257212/Tottenham-sign-Lewis-Holtby.html Source2: https://twitter.com/SpursOfficial

Jemdt (talk) 16:20, 4 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Number

He wears number 10, not 14. (http://www.schalke04.de/profis/bundesligakader/10-holtby.html) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 93.202.202.225 (talk) 18:39, 4 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed Govvy (talk) 18:43, 4 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Playoffs

I have recently updated Lewis's stats but I'm not sure if the two appearances from the 2014-15 season's playoffs should be included under 'League' or under 'Other'. The infobar at the top reflects 22 games played which includes the playoffs while the career statistics table has excluded them. Liam E. Bekker (talk) 12:23, 10 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Play-off matches are not ordinary league matches, and should therefore be included in the Other column. Mattythewhite (talk) 15:38, 10 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 11:36, 2 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I should have this done by Sunday JAGUAR 11:36, 2 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
Would it be possible for the second paragraph of the lead to be expanded a little?

"and has since won 3 caps for the national side." - three
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