Talk:Let's Go to the Mall/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Adamstom.97 (talk · contribs) 20:43, 20 October 2018 (UTC)

I don't usually dabble with music articles, but this is a subject that I am definitely happy to review! I'll go through the article soon, and get back to you with some feedback. - adamstom97 (talk) 20:43, 20 October 2018 (UTC)

I've just got a couple of things that need to be touched up before I promote the article to GA:

• "the complication soundtrack album"?

Fixed. Damian Vo (talk) 04:12, 21 October 2018 (UTC)

• I am a little confused about how some of the content has been structured. I feel like the composition stuff should go with the development info, even if it is as a "Composition" subsection of an overall development section. That would leave the "Fictionalization" section, which I think could be given a better name such as "Fictional history" or something like that. I wonder if it would make sense to merge that with the "Effects" section (which I think could also be named better). Maybe have a play around with all of those bits and see what you come up with.

I merged the "Fictionalization" with the "Background" section and changed the final section's title from "Effects" to "Aftermath". Damian Vo (talk) 04:12, 21 October 2018 (UTC)

Other than those, I think the article is in pretty good shape. See what you can do there and let me know if you have any questions. I'll give it another look over once those bits are sorted out. - adamstom97 (talk) 03:04, 21 October 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for taking this review. I look forward to your comments. Damian Vo (talk) 04:12, 21 October 2018 (UTC)

I think that really helped with the flow of the article. Well done. I have had another read through the article and I now feel that it meets all the criteria and is good to go. Pass - adamstom97 (talk) 09:43, 21 October 2018 (UTC)