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GA Review

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    The only issue is the sentence "She graduated from Stanford University in 1940 with a Bachelor of Arts degree, and soon married Schenley liquors manager Lewis Rosensteil; they had two children but divorced." This would be best split into two sentences. Otherwise the article is well written. -Fixed
    B. MoS compliance:
    Please expand the introduction. You establish the subject well, but the introduction should also give an overview of the content of the article. -fixed
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    Well referenced.
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    Article overviews all major aspects of subjects life. However, future expansion is very possible. I recommend the book Legacy: A Biography of Moses and Walter Annenberg which would greatly help expand the entire article. One thing I remember is I believe Mrs. Annenberg was criticized at first when she started to redo the ambassador's home.
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
    No problems.
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
    No edit wars.
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    Image is usable.
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
    Image is relevant.
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
    Only the above two issues are keeping this article from good article status. My issues have been addressed.
Hi, thanks for the review. I believe that I have completed the tasks holding this article back from becoming GA. Thanks, Happyme22 (talk) 16:21, 30 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]