Talk:Lena Rivers (1910 film)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 20:59, 2 June 2015 (UTC)

I'm doing a GA sweep JAGUAR  20:59, 2 June 2015 (UTC)

Initial comments

• Question: if a still image of the film exists, then can it be defined 'lost'? This is the most comprehensive 1910 film I've reviewed so far!
• "The film follows a young woman who leaves home to search for employment and becoming married to a wealthy man" - this is a run-on, could be re-worded to The film follows a young woman who leaves home to search for employment, then after becoming married to a wealthy man
• Nothing on production in the lead, so this does not summarise per WP:LEAD. Even mentioning a little about production would be great

• Adding on to this, I would recommend a small expansion of the lead and a split into two paragraphs

• "it is likely that numerous other character roles and persons appeared in the film" - people, or "actors"

Close - promoted

I was going to put it on hold, but nevermind, the content and references are all there, so this meets the GA criteria. I would recommend mentioning something about production in the lead JAGUAR  21:17, 2 June 2015 (UTC)