Talk:Lelouch Lamperouge/GA1

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Nominator: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 17:42, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: TeenAngels1234 (talk · contribs) 22:43, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Stay tuned.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 22:43, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"For the original video animation Code Geass: Akito the Exiled, director Kazuki Akane told the artists to dress them in just their underwear so they would not be able to hide their weapons, but as it was too pathetic, he told the staff that they were going to have to wear only their underwear." Can you explain this better?
- Reworded.
"sense of ethics.[12][13][14][15][16] One such example was.." Is the interruction needed?
- Reworded. This is quite a controversial section so it tends to be edited a lot. Guess I'll try requesting for protection in the future.
"Ōkouchi discussed the idea that while Lelouch is not a person who fights for justice, he would ally with other forces to rescue either Suzaku, C.C., or Nunnally." Source?
- Done
"Fukuyama regarded Suzaku's new persona as Zero as his own way of paying for his sins. Suzaku killing Lelouch was decided by the staff ever since the series began." Wait. Wasn't Zero Lelouch new persona? Also, the last part is already mentioned in the previous section.
- Reworded. Suzaku becomes the new Zero in the Code Geass finale to kill Lelouch as part of their requiem pan.

@Tintor2:. Sorry for the delay.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 11:00, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TeenAngels1234: No problems. Thanks for helping with the grammar.Tintor2 (talk) 18:33, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The whole Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion R2 is too long and detailed.
- Cut
"but starts hallucinating memories from Rebellion". Rebellion in italics, I think?
- Removed
"who starts punching him in anger until he falls asleep when C.C. claims that she is the one who wants the resurrection and not Lelouch." This sentence is too long and complicated. Also: maybe "she is the one who wanted" is better?
- Revised
"Taking place 7 years after Zero Requiem while in the same alternate continuity of Re;surrection, Lelouch comes across Sakuya Sumeragi, the current princess of Japan and the child of Shery Me Britannia who is on the run from Neo Britannia, a nation formed by Britannian remnants who wished to restore the nation back to its prime of Charles' vision." Same. This is a looooong sentence.
- Revised.

@Tintor2: That's all for now.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 16:27, 28 July 2024 (UTC) @TeenAngels1234: Thanks. Revised everything.Tintor2 (talk) 17:17, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Okay. So, I just have to do a final reading of this article. Please, be patient. It's a relatively long article and I've been busy. If everything's fine, I'll pass it, since I already think it meets all the criteria.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 22:10, 2 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for the delay, again. Now. The article is well-written with a good prose. The topic is clearly described even if I didn't remember a single episode of the show. The sources are good. Passing it.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 21:14, 8 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]