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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 02:26, 1 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:26, 1 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

ping - wonder if you forgot about this. Parsecboy (talk) 16:49, 7 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Nah, today's just the day for Wiki stuff.

  • Images appropriately licensed, no DABs and external links.
  • Link class in the lede; anti-torpedo bulges, rudder.
    • All done.
  • What do you mean by bow bulge? A bulbous bow? If so then link it, if a link exists.
    • Sometimes I write things and have no idea how I got there later...
      • I know the feeling.
  • Typo: 20&bnsp;enlisted men
    • Fixed.
  • Fix the infobox re # of diesel engines
    • Done.
  • This can't be right Nürnberg had four plants which comprised two 300 kW turbo-generators and two 350 kW diesel generators, for a total output of 1,300 kW, also at 220 volts. Also plants reads oddly, perhaps installations?
    • What can't be right about it? That's what Whitley says. As for plants -> installations, done.
      • On first read, I saw four installations, each with four generators... Perhaps something like "four generators (linked), two turbo and two diesel" with ratings, of course.
  • Fix this: The rudder was augmented with special steering system on the engine transmissions; ther had
    • Fixed.
  • Deck armor thickness disagrees between infobox and main body. Also torpedo diameter for Leipzig.
  • It's a class article, add turret and barbette armor to the infobox
    • Done.
  • Add info on the aircraft and their handling equipment.
    • Added.
  • Rephrase this: Nürnberg was the only major warship of the Kriegsmarine to survive the war intact, apart from the heavy cruiser Prinz Eugen, along the lines of "Nürnberg was second-largest Kriegsmarine warship to survive the war intact, after the heavy cruiser Prinz Eugen, ..."
  • Need place of pub for Whitley and standardize on either state abbreviations or spelling them out.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:34, 7 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]