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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 02:26, 1 September 2013 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:26, 1 September 2013 (UTC)
- ping - wonder if you forgot about this. Parsecboy (talk) 16:49, 7 September 2013 (UTC)
Nah, today's just the day for Wiki stuff.
- Images appropriately licensed, no DABs and external links.
- Link class in the lede; anti-torpedo bulges, rudder.
- All done.
- What do you mean by bow bulge? A bulbous bow? If so then link it, if a link exists.
- Sometimes I write things and have no idea how I got there later...
- I know the feeling.
- Sometimes I write things and have no idea how I got there later...
- Typo: 20&bnsp;enlisted men
- Fixed.
- Fix the infobox re # of diesel engines
- Done.
- This can't be right Nürnberg had four plants which comprised two 300 kW turbo-generators and two 350 kW diesel generators, for a total output of 1,300 kW, also at 220 volts. Also plants reads oddly, perhaps installations?
- What can't be right about it? That's what Whitley says. As for plants -> installations, done.
- On first read, I saw four installations, each with four generators... Perhaps something like "four generators (linked), two turbo and two diesel" with ratings, of course.
- What can't be right about it? That's what Whitley says. As for plants -> installations, done.
- Fix this: The rudder was augmented with special steering system on the engine transmissions; ther had
- Fixed.
- Deck armor thickness disagrees between infobox and main body. Also torpedo diameter for Leipzig.
- Must have been a typo.
- Did Leipzig really have 50 cm torpedoes in the infobox? And don't forget the space for the ×.
- Yes, I guess I overlooked that when I wrote the prose section. Parsecboy (talk) 14:57, 8 September 2013 (UTC)
- Did Leipzig really have 50 cm torpedoes in the infobox? And don't forget the space for the ×.
- Must have been a typo.
- It's a class article, add turret and barbette armor to the infobox
- Done.
- Add info on the aircraft and their handling equipment.
- Added.
- Rephrase this: Nürnberg was the only major warship of the Kriegsmarine to survive the war intact, apart from the heavy cruiser Prinz Eugen, along the lines of "Nürnberg was second-largest Kriegsmarine warship to survive the war intact, after the heavy cruiser Prinz Eugen, ..."
- See how it reads now.
- Looks good. Take care of these minor tweaks and we'll be done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:11, 8 September 2013 (UTC)
- See how it reads now.
- Need place of pub for Whitley and standardize on either state abbreviations or spelling them out.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:34, 7 September 2013 (UTC)
- Fixed. Thanks for reviewing the article, Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 01:02, 8 September 2013 (UTC)