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GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 23:38, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:25, 4 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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1. Prose  On hold

2. Verifiability  On hold

3. Depth of Coverage  Pass

4. Neutral  Pass

5. Stable  Pass

6. Illustrations  Pass

7. Miscellaneous  Pass

Comments

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1.

  • Isn't Elves a proper noun in Tolkien's writings? I think all instances of Elf, Elves, or Elvish should probably be capitalized then, although I may be wrong.
Done.
Done.
  • "Legolas helped fend off an attack by Saruman's wolves" - Maybe this is a little crufty and nitpicky, but weren't they technically wargs?
Done, and linked.
Done.
  • Link Saruman at the first mention, not the second
Done.
  • I think Orcs should be capitalized, as it's technically a proper noun in-universe
Done.
  • Silvan Elves is a duplink
Fixed.
  • Nazgul is a duplink
Fixed.
  • Rivendell is a duplink
Fixed.

2.

  • IMDB is user-generated and is not a reliable source
Replaced.
  • "Legolas is absent from the 1980 animated version of The Return of the King, but was voiced by David Collings in the 1981 BBC Radio 4 adaptation.[7]" - The bit about the 1980 film doesn't seem to be in the ref.
Removed.
  • Normally blogspot isn't a great ref, but the author, Brian Sibley, seems to be a well-qualified person, if Brian Sibley is the same person.
Yes, it's him, and he's authorlinked.
  • Ref 11 is flagging some sort of formatting error, not sure what the issue is.
Fixed.

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Placing on hold, just a few issues to deal with. Good work. I've made a couple tweaks to the infobox, you might want to look over those. Hog Farm (talk) 00:06, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]