Talk:Leatherhead/GA1

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 00:06, 30 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I should have this finished in a day or two. I'm not sure if I've been to Leatherhead but I can't imagine its High Street being worse than some that I can think of in Hampshire! ♦ jaguar 00:06, 30 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"Leatherhead was primarily an agricultural settlement and a weekly market was held until the mid-Elizabethan era" - would read better as Leatherhead was primarily an agricultural settlement with a weekly market being held until the mid-Elizabethan era
- Done. Rephrased as requested. Mertbiol (talk) 10:33, 4 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Excavations of the manor house site (now known as The Mounts) in the mid-20th century, provided" - unnecessary comma
- Done. Comma removed. Mertbiol (talk) 10:33, 4 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"New housing developments were built in Fairfield, Highlands and Kingston Roads, and Queen Anne's Garden" - when? In 1911?
- Done. Added date range. Mertbiol (talk) 10:33, 4 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"In 2021, The local police force is Surrey Police" - necessary capital letter
- Done. Replaced uppercase "T" with a lowercase "t". Mertbiol (talk) 10:33, 4 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"The headquarters of the charity moved to Epsom" - when was this? If not known, rephrase to 'since moved'
- Done. I cannot find a date for the move, so I have rephrased the sentence as requested. Mertbiol (talk) 10:33, 4 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Eric Idle, in Native American costume says" - Eric Idle can be linked
- Done. Wiki link added as requested. Mertbiol (talk) 10:33, 4 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I have. This is well-written, comprehensive and well sourced. I couldn't find much to point out, as evidenced by the short review. Sorry about that. On hold. ♦ jaguar 00:03, 4 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Jaguar: Thanks very much for your comments. I have made the changes that you have requested. Best wishes Mertbiol (talk) 10:33, 4 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, another Surrey GA!

♦ jaguar 12:21, 4 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks very much @Jaguar: for your review and for promoting this article so quickly. Thanks also to @Polyamorph: for their input in the later stages of preparing for nomination. Best wishes Mertbiol (talk) 12:38, 4 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]