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Reviewer: warrior4321 23:32, 10 January 2010 (UTC)GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria[reply]

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Review

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Disambiguation links
  • There is one disambiguation link, [[Sandbox]]
Prose
  • ...[the second broadcast episode of]... second aired episode?
  • Is it the first or second segment of the episode?
  • ...[ In it, stepbrothers ]... in the episode, stepbrothers
  • ...[and Ferb decide to build an elaborate beach complex]... and Ferb constructed an elaborate beach complex
  • ...[in their backyard in order to survive the intense heat wave that has struck their city.] in their own backyard to survive the heatwave that has struck Danville
  • ...[struck their city. Meanwhile, the boys'] struck Danville, while Perry the Platypus
  • ...[Perry, strives to stop his arch nemesis Dr. Heinz Doofenshmirtz from destroying all of the] Perry the Platypus successfully halts the destruction of all the lawn gnomes in the tri-state area by his arch nemesis, Dr.Doofensmirtz.
  • Why is Lawn Gnome Beach Party of Terror put like -- "Lawn Gnome Beach Party of Terror" -- shouldn't it be Lawn Gnome Beach Party of Terror?
  • ...[reviews, particularly toward the originality of its title] reviews, especially for the originality of its title
  • What is an intense heat wave?
  • ...[An intense heat wave has struck the town of Danville. Stepbrothers Phineas and Ferb are too exhausted to do anything but lie around in their backyard] Due to a heat wave striking Danville, stepbrothers Phineas and Ferb are exhausted and do nothing but rest in their backyard.
References
  • A e-shopping website is not a reliable source.
So? Wikipedia has it's own page on Wikipedia, yet Wikipedia is not a reliable source even in Wikipedia articles. warrior4321 00:03, 13 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Major aspects
  • Why no cultural references?

Initially, I had put this article on hold but after completing the full review, it can be seen that this article is on the path to GA but still needs some work. The first thing I would get done is a copy edit of the article, as the prose needs a lot of work as can be seen above. I'm sorry to say this article does not currently meet GA standards. warrior4321 23:34, 11 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I have replied.