Talk:Lahaina Banyan Court Park/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 20:18, 21 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 20:18, 21 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

Old Lahaina Park is linked in the lead, yet it just redirects to here. Is an article being planned for there? I presume not since any info useful is already here. If not removing it may be best.
- Done. Removed link to Old Lahaina Fort and restored bolding. Link was added by copy editor User:Baffle gab1978.[1] I'm not sure why it was added. Viriditas (talk) 02:51, 30 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
The Parking PDF is a deadlink; find an archive or replacement.
- Done. Replaced old dead link with new live link. Viriditas (talk) 03:09, 30 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Lahaina's already linked in the lead, so the link in Geography isn't needed.
- Done. Link removed, however, I'm a bit confused by this. Usually, we link once in the main article and once in the lead. Are you saying that per WP:OVERLINK, the proximity of the lead to the first section (geography) and its value as a location don't require two links? Viriditas (talk) 03:13, 30 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
" King Kamehameha III Elementary School—an archaeological site associated with the aliʻi—to the south" An elementary school is an archaeological site? That sounds a bit odd. That may very well be the case, but want to confirm that that's right.
- Done. Added "the campus" resides on an archaeological site. Viriditas (talk) 04:30, 30 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
" According to Henry L. Sheldon, "the business of the entire population was the furnishing of supplies to whalers and entertaining the crews"[11]" needs period.
- Done. Another error introduced by the copy editor.[2] Viriditas (talk) 03:19, 30 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
" An 1848 inventory lists 6 large cannons, 21 small cannons, 6 breech-loaders, and eight which did not work." Either write the numbers out or don't; in this case change eight to 8.
- Done. Changed "eight" to "8". Viriditas (talk) 04:34, 30 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Not too much to fix. I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when fixed. Wizardman 20:41, 21 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Due to editor inactivity I'm extending the hold for a week. Wizardman 18:07, 27 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. I'm addressing the issues over the next 12 hours. Viriditas (talk) 02:46, 30 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Finished. Let me know if there is more to do. Viriditas (talk) 04:34, 30 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 23:36, 30 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]