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Newspaper article

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Not sure if this would be a suitable source for environmental impacts. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:17, 18 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Laguna Negra/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:29, 24 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Lead
Climate and vegetation
Carbonates and microbrial mats
  • " but uranium-thorium dating performed on one oncolites indicates that it began to develop in the Late Holocene" - The use of "one" and "it" suggest that only one oncolite was tested, but then the plural is used in the sentence, so its unclear if one oncolite or many were tested.
    Replaced with a singular. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:07, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Gloss what an "entombed" diatom is
    The source doesn't bother to explain, either. Added a Wiktionary link. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:07, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Lithium mining
  • Personally, I think this mini-section is probably out of scope. The Salar Tres Quebradas salt falt isn't considered to be part of the scope of the rest of the article' it's just a nearby feature that's briefly mentioned as part of the regional context. Since the Salar Tres Quebradas isn't part of the discussion for biology or much of the rest of the article, it seems odd to me to treat that feature as within scope here, but not in there. I'd recommend removing it, unless a strong case can be made for it being within the scope of Laguna Negra
    I've commented it out. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:07, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
References
Other

Placing on hold. Hog Farm Bacon 18:52, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Replied, Hog Farm Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:07, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]