Talk:Laguna Miscanti

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Review: November 1, 2021. (Reviewed version).

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 05:00, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll look at this tomorrow when I am more awake! — Ghost River 05:00, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

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Infobox and lede

No comma after "of the Antofagasta Region"
Removed. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Miñiques volcano" → "The Miñiques volcano"
I don't think that a "the" is strictly necessary. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
To be pedantic, the "Antofagasta Region" is not mentioned in the body and is not cited
Now it is with citation. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Diacritic needed in "Laguna Miñiques"
Done? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Geography

Laguna Miñiques should be linked upon its first mention (5,000 tourists) and delinked in the following clause
It already is in the lead? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hydrography and geology

"It is a maximally" → "Laguna Miscanti is a maximally"
Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Diacritic needed for Cerro Miñiques
Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Delink Laguna Miñiques in this section

Hydrology

"ranging from the Miocene to Holocene age"
Not sure that this is correct - Miocene is often a modifier to "age" rather than a proper noun. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:22, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Climate

"a little warmer" – can we be more precise?
No, sorry. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:22, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Delink Holocene, linked above
Hyphen to em dash in "late Pleistocene-early Holocene wet period"
Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Biology

Comma after "Widgeonweed grows at the lakeshores"

References

The first two sources are inconsistent with the citation style used in all future refs
All online sources should have access dates, including the journal articles being linked
I don't think that journal sources get access dates even when linked. I think I got the reports, however. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:22, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

General comments

Image and map are properly licesned and relevant
No stability concerns in the revision history
Earwig score looks good
@GhostRiver: Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:22, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Jo-Jo Eumerus I have left additional comments on the sections I did not get to earlier. — Ghost River 01:33, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  - @GhostRiver: I think all is done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
    - I have made a few additional changes myself; things linked in the lede still need to be linked upon their first mention in the body. In any case, I am passing this article. — Ghost River 16:40, 1 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]