Talk:Konstantin Kulikov/GA1
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 21:17, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
I will talk a look at this one in due course. Zawed (talk) 21:17, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
Lead
- Suggest English translation in brackets for general-mayor?
- Done
Early life...
- In a month, he ...: seems unusual phrasing to me, suggest "The next month,..."
- Done
- English translation for "unter-ofitser"? (like there is for "ryadovoy")
- Done
- ...he returned to Petrograd: should mention this is the new name for St Petersburg
- Done
- It would make for a short first section, but I would break 'World War I and Russian Civil War' out from the 'Early life' section
- Split paragraph instead
Interwar period
- English translation for "kombrig"
- Done
- Kulikov received the rank of major general...: English-language rank used here rather than the Russian general-mayor
- Done
World War II
- ...forced to retreat to the Dnieper.: the phrase "forced to" is used earlier in this sentence, suggest changing this usage here
- Done
Sources
- Given history of nominator, happy to AGF on sourcing
- No ISBN for the Bulkin ref? And is Penza the publisher or place of publication?
- No ISBN
- Sverdlov: English translation should be title case for consistency with other titles. Also, does it have an ISBN to go with the OCLC number?
- No ISBN
Other stuff
- One dupe link: Dnieper
- Done
- I'm uncertain that the image tag for [File:Куликов К.Е.jpg] is correct since the photograph would have been produced by the German authorities?
That's it for me. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:40, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- @Kges1901: just checking you have seen this? Zawed (talk) 21:19, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
- I only just saw the comments and will respond shortly. Kges1901 (talk) 22:31, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
- Happy with your changes, so am passing this as GA now. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:23, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
- I only just saw the comments and will respond shortly. Kges1901 (talk) 22:31, 3 November 2023 (UTC)