Talk:Kiss & Cry (song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 03:17, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- Everything looks good!
Lead
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[edit]- Also looks good!
Paragraph 2
[edit]- Since this article seems to be written in American English, "favourable" should actually be "favorable"
Background and release
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[edit]- I don't think you need to mention what each of the mixers and recorders are managed by; it seems pretty unnecessary to me
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[edit]- Add "was" before "finally served as..."
- Rest looks great
Composition
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[edit]- Fix "song "sound like"... (wrong tense here)
- "analysed" --> "analyzed"
- You can summarize and/or paraphrase some of these quotes so this section isn't so dependent on them
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[edit]- Good
Critical response
[edit]- "labelling" --> "labeling"
- Please change to "Japanese music editor Random J highlighted it as one of the album's best tracks, praising it for being "funky" and "bouncy"."
Accolades and recognitions
[edit]- change title; "recognitions" isn't a word
- Once again, "recognitions" isn't a word
- "favourite" --> "favorite"
- Is 24/25 the lowest position? Or was the poll ranking the top 24 positions?
Commercial performance
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[edit]- You use "chart week" and "charting weeks" quite frequently; you can change it up a bit if you please
- Remove "on the singles chart" in the second to last sentence
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[edit]- "Billboard" needs to be italicized
- Good elsewhere
Music video and promotion
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[edit]- Add the year to August 2 please
- Quote with Ref #38 needs to be a bit shorter; you can summarize/paraphrase it please
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[edit]- Add the year to August 31 please
Chart and certifications
[edit]- Shouldn't the "Japan Yearly Chart" be placed in the "Year-end" format?
See also
[edit]- Put the first quotation mark around "Beautiful World"; you're missing it
External links
[edit]- Add a MetroLyrics link to the song's official lyrics using the template; see "Make Me Like You"'s external links section for example
- The only needed template here is "Utada Hikaru songs", not "Utada Hikaru" since the song is not linked in the template
End of GA Review:
[edit]Another good article, on hold for seven days; thanks! Carbrera (talk) 20:13, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
- @Carbrera: All done and dusted
Regarding the recording part in the background section, I removed the mixing/editing part but left the studio recording in. CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 04:41, 3 June 2016 (UTC)