Talk:Kimberley Joseph/GA1
GA Review
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Overall the article is good, however I have the following concerns:
- Ref #13 is a deadlink.
- "The short-lived soap was on Australian screens for 15 months before being cancelled, but Joseph gained experience and friendships with Raelee Hill, Megan Connolly, and Isla Fisher." This sentence doesn't flow right to me with the rest of the paragraph. Not sure how to fix it, it just seems weird.
- Never been a fan of using "as of 200x" in articles. Reword it.
- The prose in general could use some fine-tuning.
I'll put it on hold and double-check the article upon completion. Wizardman 22:07, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
- I think I've got everything now. Bradley0110 (talk) 10:32, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
- Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 14:33, 24 July 2009 (UTC)