Talk:Kill the Alligator and Run/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:25, 11 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lede: Link animated
- Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lede: Link sitcom
- Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lede: Add "television" between animated and sitcom
- Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lede: Only Fox should be linked, not network
- Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lede: To calm him down, the Simpson family → To calm him down, Homer and the rest of the Simpson family
- Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Plot: I don't think "insane" is a word for Wikipedia. Lol. Perhaps change it.
- Yeah it is, Insanity. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Plot: The Simpsons → Simpson family
- "The Simpsons" is better here because I use "they" later in the sentence, and it sounds better than "it". Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Production: 1999–2000 should be 1999–00, as per WP:YEAR
- I'd prefer not, since "2000" starts with "20" and not "19". Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Production: Link 1999–2000 to the US TV schedule here.
- Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Production: "The Simpsons producer Ian Maxtone-Graham directed Bader". Show the producer directed him? Haha; lol.
- I don't understand what you mean... Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Production: #1 should be No. 1, as per WP:POUND
- Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Production: I'd consider paraphrasing. Too many quotes in production
- I disagree, there's hardly any quotes at all. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Release: Only Fox should be linked, not network
- Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Release: on the box set → in the box set
- Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
References: Ref. 14 — About.com is not a good source. Thus, it should be removed.
- In some cases About.com is not a good source, in this case it is as the article was written by Nancy Basile. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
External links: TV.com link?
- Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
External links: Categories below should be sorted in alphabetical order please.
- Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Overall; a great article. In good shape, I will be happy to pass as soon as the above concerns are fixed. Thanks, TBran dl ey 15:51, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! :) Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Okay; looks good. I'll pass the article for GA. TBran dl ey 16:41, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]