Talk:Keterkaitan Keterikatan

Keterkaitan Keterikatan has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: June 14, 2022. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Keterkaitan Keterikatan/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Figureskatingfan (talk · contribs) 20:41, 6 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I will be reviewing this article for the June Backlog Drive.

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
The prose is adequate for GA. One picky point: you overuse the word "Noah". Please replace it with "they" or "them" or "the band" when appropriate.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
All of the references are in Indonesian, which I unfortunately don't know, so I'm AGF that they work and that they support your claims.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
Again, I'm AGF; the article seems to hit everything album articles need to hit.
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
No evidence of edit warring.
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Only two images, one in the infobox and the other of the pinsi boat; both are tagged correctly. They're fine, but how about including images of the band and/or band members?
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
Nice work; once you fix the small grammar issue, I'll promote to GA.

I've fixed the grammar issue. About the image, I think I can crop an image of Uki from File:Peterpan2008.jpg, but it might take a while since I'm currently a little busy in the real world. Daud (talk) 13:00, 14 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Daud I.F. Argana: thanks for your quick response. No worries about the image; add it when you're able. I will go and promote to GA now. Congrats, keep up the good work. Best, Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 17:05, 14 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]