Talk:Kenya at the 1998 Winter Olympics

Kenya at the 1998 Winter Olympics has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: October 22, 2016. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Yellow Dingo (talk · contribs) 23:56, 21 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Taking, will post full review within an hour. — Yellow Dingo (talk) 23:56, 21 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Review

"Kenya first competed in the Summer Olympics in Melbourne, Australia" - mention it was in 1956
"participated on nine" → "participated in the Summer Olympics on nine"
"Both Boit and Henry Bitok were a runner" → what?
"each runner" → "both athletes"
Both the "-" should be a "—"
"welcoming as he" → "welcoming him as he"

Overall

Nice article, putting on hold. — Yellow Dingo (talk) 03:10, 22 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Yellow Dingo: Thanks for reviewing. A couple of those errors were because I thought I'd finished the article and then found out that there was a second Kenyan who tried to qualify - so changing a couple of the singulars to plurals got missed. I've run the dash tool to fix those issues - I'd meant to prior to nominating but it got late and I forgot. Miyagawa (talk) 09:31, 22 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, good job. I'm happy to pass this. Congrats! — Yellow Dingo (talk) 09:34, 22 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]