Talk:Kenneth Odumegwu/GA1

GA Review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:24, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 19:48, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 20:06, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:06, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Lead

I think you need to add a sentence in the lead about his early life. Maybe mentioning where he went to college and how he got into the IPPP.

Early life

to tryout in this use, "tryout" should be "try out"
Odumegwu posted a reported 4.8-second, I think you can delete "reported" as that is implied

Professional career

No comments

References

Refs 3, 6, 10, 14 need access dates.
Ref 8 needs |url-access=subscription
Refs 19 and 20 aren't consistent with the other sources (should be Green Bay Packers and Seattle Seahawks instead of Packers.com and Seahawks.com)
Ref spot checks were consistent with what is being cited.

That's all I got BeanieFan11. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:24, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: Expanded the lead, made the early life edits. Changed refs 19/20, added access-dates to 6, 10, 4, added subscription to 8; as for 3, it seems that became a deadlink so I added an archive to it. Is that everything? BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:20, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Looks good. Passed! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:23, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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