Talk:Ken Moore (American football)/GA1

GA Review

Passed. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 04:41, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 15:28, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 13:21, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

(===...===), level 4 and so on.-->

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

This is a follow up on my prior review. All points have now been addressed. Nice work! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 21:42, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Added Midwest Football League (1935–1940) players cat.
Added many other cats.
No date for the picture I presume?
- Added c. 1937.
  - How'd you get 1937? ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 23:31, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    - The newspaper I clipped it from was in 1937.
      - That doesn't necessarily mean that's when the pic was taken. I just removed the date. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 04:40, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"Early life and college career" remove career. I've been removing that recently when it's combined with the early life section. It's a little wordy.
- Removed.
What are "All-Opponent teams"?
- Some teams back then would make 'All-Opponent' teams, which was a like an All-America except the players were from teams they had played against in the season. Any suggestions on how to clarify?
  - A note with a ref of some sort would be good. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 23:31, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    - Added a note. Does that work @WikiOriginal-9:? BeanieFan11 (talk) 18:56, 20 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
No details on when he served in the Navy I guess?
- None found.

That's all. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 13:21, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:45, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- That looks good now. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 04:40, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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