Talk:Keeps Gettin' Better: A Decade of Hits/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 09:31, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Multiple dead links

@Calvin999: Done — HĐ (talk) 03:03, 13 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Genres are missing from the infobox

Done

two remakes of her previous singles → I would actually state what these two songs are

Done

Keeps Gettin' Better was released exclusively through Target retailer in the United States. → Song or album? I know it's italicised, indicating album, but I think it's best to include it's full title.
Keeps Gettin' Better was reviewed favorably by music critics, who praised her musical career over her first decade entering the music industry. → Same again here, it's slightly ambiguous.

Done

Moreover, → I find words like this don't actually contribute very much. It almost makes the these chartings sound more important.

Done — replaced with "Additionally"

I feel like the Lead could do with adding slightly. Perhaps a sentence saying why she decided to do a greatest hits and something about promotion.

Done

People who would pre-order the compilation also received a free → People who pre-ordered the compilation would also receive

Done

In November 2008, Aguilera confirmed the release of her first greatest hits album, → but it was release on November 6? So no one knew about it prior to November 1?

Done

Again I think you should write Keeps Gettin' Better: A Decade of Hits should be written instead of just Keeps Gettin' Better because it could be confused with the song throughout the article.

Done

If you're going to keep Promotion before Commercial performance instead of after, then I'd put the live performances at the end of the paragraph, and info about the release of the single at the start.

Done

In Promotion, those songs previously not mentioned which were performed at the AMA's need linking.

Done

The 2010 chart with the US Top Catalogue album needs to be the same width as the 2008 table.

Done

You could still include the U.S. sales in the Certifications table, just leave the certification blank and put 530,000 in the sales.

Done — HĐ (talk) 05:56, 4 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

On hold — ₳aron 18:40, 3 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Calvin999: I have adressed all of the issues. Thanks for the review, — HĐ (talk) 05:56, 4 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Passing :) — ₳aron 09:00, 4 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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