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GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
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    1.b checkY
  • 2
    2.a checkY
    2.b checkY
    2.c checkY
    2.d checkY
  • 3
    3.a checkY
    3.b checkY
  • 4
    4.a checkY
  • 5
    5.a checkY
  • 6
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  • No DAB links checkY
  • No dead links checkY
  • No missing citations checkY

Prose Suggestions

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Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

  • You may want to expand the lead, possibly including facts about her illegitimacy, or her death.
  • Her father's husband Keaupuni was not biological father as was later attested by Mele, a witness in the divorce suit between him and Maheha in 1855. I think this is garbled, I believe it should be:
    Her husband Keaupuni was not the biological father of the baby as was later attested by Mele, a witness in the divorce suit between him and Maheha in 1855.