Talk:Kat (Gravity Rush)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 03:17, 25 February 2023 (UTC)

Looks interesting! I will review this later today (my time zone is UTC). ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 03:17, 25 February 2023 (UTC)

That should be all! I have placed this on hold for now and left some comments below. Please ping me once you have addressed my concerns otherwise I may not respond. Thanks, ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 23:03, 25 February 2023 (UTC)

Everything looks good to go! Nice work on the Ark of Time addition as well. I am now happy to pass this article for GA status per the changes implemented. Congrats on the fantastic article! ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 18:19, 27 February 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio check

Earwig says good to go. Quotations are used in-line with WP:COPYQUOTE.

File

The image is relevant, appropriate and copyright-free:

• File:Gravity Rush 2 Kat.png: valid public domain rationale; downscaled image.

Prose

• Add the abbreviation for downloadable content in parentheses so "In that game's DLC chapter" makes sense for readers unfamiliar with thr abbreviation.

 Done

• Does PlayStation Matsuri have to have quotation marks?

 Done

• Is her love of food prominently noted or referenced throughout one or both of the games she is in? Otherwise I do not see it as particularly noteworthy.

 Done

• "they create Gryps or Sphinx, a far larger guardian with immense power, depending on who initiates the transformation, Kat or Raven." – does Kat create Gryps and Raven Sphinx? If so, end the sentence with "respectively." to better indicate this.

 Done - Although I rephrased it more.

• Wikilink amnesia in § Appearances.

 Not done - Linked in lede already.

• Pages are linked twice in an article—once for their first mention in the lede and first mention in the body of an article. I went ahead and wikilinked it since this is only a small change.

• "with a new mysterious enemy." – any more elaboration on this?

 Done - Did a rewrite of a lot of the plot summary

• "Climbing the World Pillar, she discovers" – recommend "Kat discovers" as she is used quite a few times in the previous sentence.

 Done - See above

• "but she is hinted at being alive in the ending" how about "but is hinted as being alive." Relatedly:
• "in the ending" – the end credits/an end scene?

 Done - See above

• "as a playable downloadable content character" – DLC character would work here per my comments above.

 Done

• "similar to how Kat "falls" through" – does falls need quotation marks here?

 Not done - This is meant to indicate that while Kat is technically falling, it's not completely uncontrolled. But if you have a better idea, tell me.

• Ah, I see. Hmm not sure honestly.

• "better-received." – I do not think the hyphen is needed here, but I could be incorrect.

 Done

• I would wikilink Western to Western world.

 Done

• "found characters who react realistically to the situation relatable" – recommend "found characters who react realistically to situations relatable"? Or, was this during beta testing etc.?

 Done

• "Twinfinite called Kat" – should also mention the article author.

 Done

Refs

Passes spotcheck on refs 2, 7, 12, 14, 19 and 24. Nice work.

Other

Section formatting, nav, other templates and cats good.

• Add a short description.

 Done

• Recommend adding template:use X English.

 Done

• Please add WP:ALT text to the image if you do not mind.

 Done

@LunaEatsTuna: I have made most suggested changes, please tell me if there is anything more necessary. ᴢxᴄᴠʙɴᴍ (ᴛ) 07:03, 27 February 2023 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.