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"The song was written by" → "It was written by" plus this should be swapped with the production sentence
"Ryan McMahon, Ryan Rabin, and her boyfriend Jack Patterson." → "Ryan McMahon, Patterson, and Ryan Rabin."
"Patterson produced the track" → "Marina's boyfriend Jack Patterson produced the song" since this will be the second sentence in the new order
"It was released for" → "The song was released for"
"as the album's fifth and final single in the United States" → "in the United States as the album's fifth and final single" with the appropriate target
"she wasn't initially aware of it." → "she was not initially aware of the inspiration."
"The track is a" → "It is a"
"beat and lyrics that describe" → "beat, which lyrically describes"
"it recalled her earlier works while others found it" → "the song recalled Marina's earlier works, while other critics found it"
"appears on Marina's sixth extended play," → "was released on Marina's sixth EP,"
"In order to proceed with a new era" → "For proceeding with a new era"
"in order to perform as just" → "in order to release music as just"
"She explained that to Dazed in January 2019:" → "She explained that,"
Why is Luis Fonsi mentioned here when he is not in the other articles with the same background?
"under her new name." → "under the new name."
"and an accompanying multi-leg concert tour." → "and first as Marina." since current info is irrelevant
"as the twelfth track overall and fourth on the Fear portion of the album." → "as the twelfth track on the album and the fourth on the Fear portion of it.
"Love + Fear is a" → "Conceptually, Love + Fear is a"
"experiencing these two emotions." → "experiencing the aforementioned two emotions."
"Ryan Rabin, and Marina's boyfriend Jack Patterson, of British group Clean Bandit." → "Ryan Rabin, and Patterson." plus this should be the sentence after the production one
"It was produced by Patterson and" → ""Karma" was produced by Marina's boyfriend Jack Patterson, of British group Clean Bandit, and"
"was first released on 26 April 2019, when the rest of Love + Fear was released to the public." → "was released on 26 April 2019, as the twelfth track on Marina's fourth studio album Love + Fear."
"For its release as a commercial single, it was sent to music distributor" → "For its release as a single, the song was sent to"
Was the release definitely digital download and streaming, since Spotify is a known streaming service?
"on 29 August 2019 through" → "on 29 August 2019, through"
"and featured on the track listing for her seventh extended play, Love + Fear (Acoustic) on" → "and featured as the third track on her seventh EP Love + Fear (Acoustic), released on"
"The new version was produced" → "The version was produced"
On hold after reviewing this over the day, do not feel to question me if you have any enquires and good work here from you! --K. Peake18:48, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake – In regards to why Luis Fonsi is included here and not elsewhere is simply a little goof on my end. "Baby" is Clean Bandit's song that features both Marina and Fonsi. I will update the other articles accordingly to mention both musicians. And as for more critical reviews of "Karma", I am afraid I could not find anymore. Other than that, I believe I addressed all of your comments. Let me know if there is anything else I can do. Thanks for your patience, Carbrera (talk) 11:16, 28 August 2020 (UTC).[reply]
On hold after reviewing this over the day, do not feel to question me if you have any enquires and good work here from you! --K. Peake 18:48, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
