Talk:Karlsruhe-class cruiser/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:07, 1 December 2011 (UTC)
I'll start this one soon.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:07, 1 December 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- What do you mean by raked hull? What's a spotting top? I usually link to fighting top.
- The hull was more raked - linked to wikt:raked. I don't like the fighting top link, as it's about sailing ships. I don't think anyone expected cruisers and battleships to get close enough to where small arms would be effective weapons, and there weren't larger weapons mounted in them.
- What do you mean by raked hull? What's a spotting top? I usually link to fighting top.
- B. Focused:
- Link weather helm.
- Linked.
- Link weather helm.
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Actually 37 and 47 mm cannon were mounted in fighting tops in the late 1800s as anti-torpedo boat guns, but that was no longer the case when these ships were built. But readers still need to know what one is. Perhaps a short entry in the glossary of nautical terms giving a simple definition.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:43, 13 December 2011 (UTC)
- Right, I was talking just about these ships. Added an entry on spotting top. Parsecboy (talk) 14:51, 13 December 2011 (UTC)