Talk:Kaʻiminaʻauao/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 03:22, 19 August 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 03:22, 19 August 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

• May want to expand lead if possible, perhaps with info about her family.
• She died of the measles at the age of three in an epidemic that killed more than 10,000 Native Hawaiians. suggest:

  She died of the measles at the age of three, during an epidemic of Measles, whooping cough and influenza that killed more than 10,000 Native Hawaiians.

• Another relative of the family was the High Chiefess Kapiʻolani who plucked the ʻōhelo berries and openly defied the goddess Pele as a dramatic demonstration of her new faith in Christianity. this seems to imply that the ʻōhelo berries were sacred in some manner; would suggest explaining how they were sacred.
• @KAVEBEAR: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:42, 23 August 2018 (UTC)