Talk:KZDG/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Infobox looks good.
- Add a serial comma after "CBS Radio".
- Other than that, the lead looks good as well.
History
[edit]- "several staff" doesn't sound right as staff already refers to more than one person. Try rewording.
- "Eastern time" → "Eastern Time"
- "new combined" → "newly combined"
- this isn't correct for the particular case, I've left this alone
- "require a divestiture" → "require divestiture"
- Add a serial comma after Ajay Bhutoria.
- Looks like someone added this during the nom—I've trimmed it back but retained one fact with an added source.
- Add a comma after "June 3, 2019" per MOS:DATECOMMA.
- "on August 2018" → "in August 2018"
Transmitter site
[edit]- "king tide" should link to king tide.
- "as king tide" → "as a king tide" or "as king tides"
References
[edit]- Archive all archivable sources, including that first PDF.
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[edit]GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not) |
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@Some Dude From North Carolina: All the changes should be made. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:15, 26 March 2021 (UTC)